WIP Poem/Song

Paper lantern, can you carry a message for me?

In a locket tucked inside a basket of thieves

And wrapped around is a cloth I held on to when

I was but a child to comfort me

And we’re all running in circles

And we’re all playing with fire

But who will step in to extinguish the flame

Cause we all need a steady hand to grasp

Daily miscalculations

Lead to daily exaggerations

And when nothing is left

How about we start over again

And never look back

This is just something I've been working on for the past month or so. It's nowhere near complete, but I still felt like posting it. I have this tune in my head of how I would want it to sound as a song, but I think it looks fine as a poem as well. What do you guys think? 

Peace Out~

Britney

Poem/Song Thingy

It is hot
It is warm
Yesterday there was a storm
Or it might have been
The day before
That

In the winter
It was cold
A few times it
Actually snowed
And I kept complaining about
That

Fall is nice
Spring is sweet
It's warm enough
That the cool breeze
Doesn't feel to strong and
That
Is
The
Time
I want to be in right now
Because
It's
Too
Warm
I'm gonna catch heat stroke...anyhow

I'm not complainin'
I'm just sayin'
Build a time machine
Take me to the future spring
And we'll all be happy


This above is a poem/song I just randomly thought of while I was typing.

Maybe me and Chan-Chan will figure out the plans for the time machine made out of Duct Tape.

DayDREAM Believer

I had this dream the other night and in part of it, it was like I had written this song, and on this laptop someone was playing the same song. Except it was a different band with the actual music to it, not just the lyrics. This is like the second time this has happened to me, but every time I wake up, I can't remember the song. And it's a pretty good song. What should I do?

Peace Out
-Britney